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Board Meeting art for Rage.

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:iconfenrislorsrai:
Sweet! That should work. But per my usual bloody critique, here's the issues...

The extended arm has a pixelated edge, both sides. It extends all the way from armpit and shoulder all the way to the wrist. It's more obvious on full view. It's a very regular choppy pixel edge. A few quick little strokes to soften the edge or add a few longer hairs to break the line should fix it.

The hair on the ruff and cheeks also is slightly too regular. Inserting a little notch in to differentiate between the skull and the neck would help. There's a dark patch right along the line of the neck towards the extended hand. Tuck that in slightly to get the facial fluff separated from the neck and you should be golden.

So really just twiddly things this time. Overall looks great, but a few minutes on those two things and it should be superkickass.

Best use of a wipe board EVER!
:iconhwango:
Glad you liked it. I addressed the issues that you mentioned, and hopefully have now attained full superkickassitude. Let me know if you spot any other problems, though, and I'll be happy to tweak further.
:iconlazywolf:
Hmmm... I wonder what he has planned...

Good Job! I like it!

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